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Vast Expanses
I've been writing a lot lately and writing is also a form of art,
So here's something to supplement the pictures--

Promise Land

I work harder everyday,
To fulfil an ambition,
which has long left me behind:
In the race to success.

In the promise land,
It awaits my presence,
So I can find for it,
a new destination to fulfil my destiny.
And then again,
I'll follow the trail of light and hope,
it leaves behind.

Each step towards my next goal,
Is a sentence,
In my book of destiny.
I author my own book.
And so I believe,
We make our own destiny,
By setting a destination,
And striving to make it there.

The promise land,
Is our past, present and future.
Everywhere we look,
We see promise land.
What we must do,
Is find a place in this vast expanse.
To build a house,
Designed by ambition,
Constructed by hard work
And bought by success.

No, grandeur is not the criteria,
A place of self satisfaction,
Where there is nothing to regret,
Where each failure brings a smile,
And all graces are at your mercy.
A place,
Where you can finally reason
The question of your existence.

But the reality is,
We don't ever make it there.
And in striving to reach such a place,
Which may be right beside us
Or hundreds of miles away,
We live a complete life,
And when we die,
We realise that with each step,
To the promise land,
We were lighting the path behind,
Paving the way for success.


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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Thu Mar 19, 2015 9:11 am

But the reality is,
We don't ever make it there.
And in striving to reach such a place,
Which may be right beside us
Or hundreds of miles away,
We live a complete life,
And when we die,
We realise that with each step,
To the promise land,
We were lighting the path behind,
Paving the way for success.


Well written Daanish! Vast grasslands of Dhilaka will inspire us for ever. Nice frame of the friends in the grassland!

BTW, your poem reminded me of a poem by one one of the Jnanapeet awardee poet in Kannada, Kuvempu which is here. There is an English translation too. I think importance of the goal is limited to the choice of path towards it and that path is what matters in life, not the end goal itself..

--
Ganesh H. Shankar
Wishing you best light,

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» Last edited by Ganesh H Shankar on Thu Mar 19, 2015 9:12 am; edited 1 time in total

Commentby daanish21 on Sun Mar 22, 2015 10:59 am

Thankyou sir! Couldn't agree more.. In fact, I don't think many people do ever achieve their ultimate goal. But that doesn't mean they're not successful!