Good to know you were "focusing/ focused" , that to with a TS lens, a not so happy "ele" in the frame & a galloping gypsy with a mind of its own (mostly) ! !
Came out pretty grand Id say.
But now that you mentioned it, what other rendition did you have in mind as in "better" ? I am curious to know how one can better this.
To my limited Vaseline smeared small mind, this is a 10/10