the moon watches the serenity.....

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the moon watches the serenity.....
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Commentby Sriharsha Ganjam on Mon Mar 25, 2013 12:55 pm

Wow the moon even though very tiny commands most of the attention. I say most because the rocks and the sky need some as well. Loved the tonality in the sky and the moon breaking the tonality makes it for me. I guess this would not have been possible in color. An apt decision to go BW. How about opening up the rocks a bit to let its details come through?



» Last edited by Sriharsha Ganjam on Mon Mar 25, 2013 12:56 pm; edited 1 time in total

Commentby nirlep on Mon Mar 25, 2013 3:35 pm

Hi Swapnil,
Love the serenity of the image. I,m absolutely in agreement with Harsha about the moon getting the attention it deserves. For me the only nit is the merger of the horizon with the top surface of rocks. Slightly higher (or maybe lower since sometimes it is not possible to get a higher ground) perspective would've helped.
Thanks for sharing

Commentby Rajkumar on Mon Mar 25, 2013 4:39 pm

Agree with Nirlep. Genrally good tones and lovely situiation
- I see posterization in the sky may need to review the workflow
- Moon could have been a little bigger and can be made a little brighter

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Commentby swapnil19 on Mon Mar 25, 2013 6:18 pm

thanks a lot sriharsha sir , nirlep sir and rajkumar sir for the feedback , i agree about the placement of rocks and their details, icouldnt reduce posterization though esp after image size was reduced...

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