Hi Samyak,
The fuzzy feel is good. As marker of progress even the road would suffice. Wish the truck was a bit distant.That white streak on the left can be removed. About the title "little gained, much more lost"; it leaves no room for me to wander in the frame. In my opinion title should be suggestive with room for subjective interpretation. For example we could've used just "progress?" or something similar.
Thanks for sharing