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Contemplation
Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:36 am
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Commentby neelu on Tue Aug 06, 2013 6:19 pm

Falak, quite liked your interpretation of the image and title of contemplation. the out of focus branches in front reaching out for the infocus branches at the back..add to the image. Nice.



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Commentby nirlep on Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:01 pm

Hi Falak
A nice contemplative mood here. At ease posture of the bird adds to the unhurried feel of the frame.
Thanks for sharing

Commentby falakvasa on Wed Aug 07, 2013 10:33 pm

Neelu ma'am - Thank you. I tried to create somewhat of a layered pattern with the branches to make the shot more visually appealing. Glad it worked.

Nirlep sir - Thank you for your feedback. What do you think about the branches at the top of the image? I decided to keep them because they add another layer and thereby more depth, but it may also seem as a distraction. Would it be better cropped out?

Commentby nirlep on Fri Aug 09, 2013 9:18 am

Falak the branches were there .you couldn't have avoided them. But for discussion's sake the branch on the top is ok til it intersects the oof horizontal branch-top left of the frame. Another thing which attracts undue attention is the triangle on the top right corner. And yes the branches do add another dimension as you said.

Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Aug 12, 2013 8:19 am

Yes Falak, 'contemplation' ! It is extremely interesting how human mind interprets arrangements, space and postures ! I think deeper understanding of these and rich experiences of life combined will produce works of art. You seem to have far more maturity compared to what some of us had when we were young like you. You will excel Falak !

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Ganesh H. Shankar
Wishing you best light,

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Fine Art Nature Photography

Commentby falakvasa on Wed Aug 14, 2013 9:12 pm

Nirlep sir - Completely agree with you regarding the triangle being a distraction. "Always check the corners of your frame", I've been taught. Disappointing I'd make such a mistake. :( Will surely correct it.

Ganesh sir -

"I think deeper understanding of these and rich experiences of life combined will produce works of art"
I couldn't agree more. And I think as I grow as a person and come across new experiences I will grow and mature as an artist as well.

As for the compliment, sir, I cannot begin to explain how much those words mean to me. Your words of encouragement are a big part of what fuels my passion. I hope to continue to produce better pieces of art. Thank you so much.



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