Dear Nirvair,
Welcome to CNP !!
When I saw a few of your images at INW I was pleasantly surprised. From your profile I also understand you are a 10th standard student. Looking at some of your images all I can say is you have a
gift of seeing from the God at this young age. I started seeing nature differently may be couple of years back (and I did my 10th class 26 years back
) Photography has some elements of science and art. Most of us spend almost decades (like me) in the former part and realize art part of it much later in this beautiful journey of photography. You seem to have latter part as a gift now itself. All I can see from a few images of yours is you need a bit more focus on some technical skills (which is very easy to acquire anyway) . I am sure will make great images which will be remembered for years to come. Wish you best of luck !
Back to this particular image this looks very artistic - I like this a lot. Three birds with open wings against high-key background adds a lot to the poetry. I think your decision of going with monochrome is very apt here (believe me - such thoughts does not occur naturally to most of us). I think opening up the stream a bit will add to the image - for all you know it may be looking ok on your screen if it is not calibrated. If you are using an uncalibrated display you may consider calibrating the display (which is a different topic altogether) so that we see the image same as you do, atleast physically
Not sure whether you are using tripod, a bit more sharpness would definitely add.
Love to have you as part of CNP, looking forward to see more of your images..