"Life - Death" - Simpler and Better?

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"Life - Death" - Simpler and Better?

Postby Ashwini Kumar Bhat » Mon May 04, 2015 11:19 pm

May be a square crop would help to convey the impact better.

What do you guys say?

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Re: "Life - Death" - Simpler and Better?

Postby ramesh_adkoli » Tue May 05, 2015 10:39 am

Ashwini, square crop definitely brings the dead to forefront and removes the distractions on RHS. On the downside, this crop further reduces the separation between the tree in BG and the stump in FG, and hogs all the attention. I would have preferred a bit more separation between the two, may be a diagonal placement? My 2 cents.
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Re: "Life - Death" - Simpler and Better?

Postby Ganesh H Shankar » Tue May 05, 2015 8:39 pm

Agree with Ramesh's views Ashwin. This is where TS lens helps! Using say 24mm TS you can balance the weight between foreground and background (by selective focussing, yet including it all which might provided needed context). Definition (or lack of it) is a powerful attribute to control visual contours..
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