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Ashok Mansur
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Mon Jun 06, 2016 7:01 pm
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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 7:12 pm

Nice and sentimental,Ashok. I tend to think cooler tonal ranges (instead of warmer) probably may go well considering the context and the message you wanted to convey.

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» Last edited by Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:17 pm; edited 1 time in total

Commentby Ashok Mansur on Mon Jun 06, 2016 7:30 pm

Understood & thanks Ganesh, where I can upload the cooler tone for comparison?



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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 8:52 pm

Ashok, the one you E-mailed me.

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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:01 pm

I took liberty to process it to reduce the energy further to make it a bit more sadder to go with your title and description. Not necessarily more beautiful but more sadder.
I felt your processed (colder) image still have a little more energy.

Does this make sense to you?

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Ganesh H. Shankar
Wishing you best light,

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Fine Art Nature Photography



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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:13 pm

May be BW? The yellow still seem to come in the way of the message.

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The point is brightness/color temperature/contrast/colors/forms/shapes.. all play a huge role in conveying different emotions. I think we don't understand it well, lot to learn. The journey never stops..!!

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» Last edited by Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:18 pm; edited 2 times in total

Commentby Ashok Mansur on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:18 pm

I kept little life in the flower by keeping it warm so hope it can convey & your pp image (you are always welcome to rectify as it helps to improve & thanks for the same) leads to sadness which justifies the title but I wanted a little warmth of hope. Well thats my assertion please respond. BnW na- some how colour is better
I would like to bring your notice that, 'comment' section should come to the bottom of the page so that it easier to refer other comments & respond



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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:24 pm

If that is the intention then don't change a bit! You as an artist is always right. The idea of showing variations was to emphasise how sensitive our mind is to all these variations, not to settle on one of them.

On pushing the comment box to down, the present design helps if we don't want to read what others wrote and post our un-biased views (first) and then read what others have written.

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Ganesh H. Shankar
Wishing you best light,

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Fine Art Nature Photography

Commentby Ashok Mansur on Mon Jun 06, 2016 9:41 pm

Have to go through the learning curve & still I feel comment box would be better if it is at the bottom atleast for responding to the comments 'my two cents'



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Commentby ramesh_adkoli on Tue Jun 07, 2016 1:25 pm

A fine frame, Ashok. I like the way you have presented it: glowing flower among the ruins of plant matter. Conveys a feeling of "down but not out". TFS.

Commentby Ashok Mansur on Tue Jun 07, 2016 5:02 pm

Thanks Ramesh for appreciating the mood of the frame

Commentby Vinayak Mane on Wed Jun 08, 2016 10:40 pm

Warmer for me . I am a die hard optimist.

Commentby karthik_ak on Wed Jun 15, 2016 8:50 pm

Awesome work here. The frame, the elements everything is nice.
I liked the cooler edit more than this, it looks very nice.

The resulting image might and well depend on the mood you were in while editing.

Wondering how this would look in IR!!

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