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Trivedi Ashvin J.
Motion!!
This image was made in evening. I slow down the shutter speed to get the birds in motion. Comments & Suggetions are most welcome.
Tue May 12, 2009 9:52 pm
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Commentby Kaushik Balakumar on Tue May 12, 2009 10:03 pm

Lovely image. The dry grass/foliage provides nice vertical texture to the image. Liked that fact that the pigeon's head has come out still. Nice rendering.

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Commentby Shankar Kiragi on Wed May 13, 2009 8:48 am

There is something nice about this image. Black patches at top right could have been avoided, just my thoughts.

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Commentby Swadeepsinh on Wed May 13, 2009 4:37 pm

Looking to the thumbnail the beauty of the image was not visible, but now it seems that there is something in this image...I think it is the bright coloured shape of the birds clearly visible through the scratches like effect (motion blur)... Yes, that is the beauty of this, I think...Very Nice...

Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Sat May 16, 2009 6:54 am

This is amazing Trivedi ! Thumbnail does not seem to justice to this image at all. What a mistake it would have been had I not opened this !

What works for me here is verticle slanted strokes which along with contrast difference gives an artistic appeal to the image. I only wish you had uniform background here. The darker upper half and mid-right seem to compete with the rest of the frame visually. That said we live in real world, not studios. It should make a nice canvas print if I am right. Great job here !

Added later : Normally I don't read others' critics before I write mine to make sure I don't get influenced by others' views. Looks like the points I have raised here have been covered already :)

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