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Weather was cold and foggy on the day of my visit. Does this composition work? C and C welcome
Mon Sep 12, 2011 11:29 pm
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Commentby Shankar Kiragi on Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:39 am

I like the foggy / misty feel as well as mild grains. Excellent image to my taste. Not sure if one of the trees will make justice to the image.

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Commentby Nilanjan Das on Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:03 am

I am somehow not finding the composition very strong, is it due to the 2nd tree ? I like the image, it has mood, feel, the subtle dreamy backdrop of the rocks, lovely. I am just thinking what might enhance the image further. Wish to hear Ganesh's ideas on this. Plz do not think that am saying this is not a good image. :)

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Commentby Sriharsha Ganjam on Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:34 pm

I personally like the trees. Its adding a nice sense of scale to the image, apart from providing the usual FG point of interest. Maybe making an image with the entire tree in frame would have been better? I am not sure if that sort of an image is possible given the local shooting conditions.

Commentby Rajkumar on Tue Sep 13, 2011 5:50 pm

Thanks guys for the time. My earlier version of this was with only one tree and cropped a little pano. Here I left it as is. Open to suggestions? Approaching the tree closer was not a option.

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Commentby Prithvi K on Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:46 pm

This is amazing Rajkumar, the mist and the silhouette of the tree make the image for me.
I am not sure about inclusion of the tree in the left corner, you could a square frame by cropping the right most tree.

Commentby Rajkumar on Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:16 pm

Thanks Prithvi. Not sure if I got you. Are you suggesting crop it to remove the right most smaller tree ?

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Commentby Prithvi K on Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:30 am

Rajkumar, I ment just cropping out the right most tree,to get a more square frame, but I now fear that the main tree might come too close to the edge of the frame.

Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Sun Sep 18, 2011 12:17 pm

I too echo the suggestion by Prithvi ! Try square crop with the right most tree excluded. Beautiful moody presentation.

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