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Hi, Definitely placement of elements and composition could have been better. any suggestions and feedback WC
Rajk
Tue Nov 22, 2011 8:53 am
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Commentby Ganesh H Shankar on Tue Nov 22, 2011 9:19 am

Raj, I think grains and almost muted tones gives a rustic appeal to the image. I like the visual weight on the slanted tree though it is very small in the frame. I tend to think a little more wider frame and not cropping the trees at the top right edge would have added further ? May be some toning to make it more moody ?

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Commentby Praveen P Mohandas on Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:54 pm

Interesting composition ....agree to Ganesh sir on the tree at the top right edge....not sure about the grain though! do you have a frame where the tree is coming in the center of the foreground twigs?

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Commentby Vikas T R on Tue Nov 22, 2011 6:24 pm

beautiful composition....but for my eyes grains/noise is taking away the mood that was felt at that location (that may be only for me).....

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Commentby Shankar Kiragi on Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:28 am

Good decision to include foreground twigs. I would agree about the trees at top right corner. Or try cropping at the top. :-)

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Commentby Rajkumar on Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:39 pm

Thanks again. I did enjoy making this image with a clear idea on the tones I wanted in the final image.
@ Ganesh- Yes will experiment with some tones
@ Praveen- Not other frame only this I could manage with my 50mm prime lens
Will try a more Pano crop

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