Ashwin - i have some found memories of such image - i had tried a simillar one quite a while back in Ganesh's house in WG and i can really say its fun to watch and shoot the moon do hide-n-seek with the coconut leaves.
Framing wise the centre composition doesnt seem to bring in the full attention ... probably pushing it to bottom right corner or playing around with vertical compo ? You might want to share some examples in the illustration forum.
Thanks for the suggestions 