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The state of mind
Wed Nov 28, 2012 7:38 pm
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Commentby Vijay Mohan Raj on Wed Nov 28, 2012 9:32 pm

Works well for me except that I see artifacting of the sky, I would prefer a non-centric divide of the horizon. The pattern of the rocks and sheet of water due to long exposure works well. I wonder why we tend to shift the image towards b/w this one would have been impeccable even in color as well.

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Commentby Rajkumar on Thu Nov 29, 2012 6:45 am

Good one. As VMR pointed out the processesing does not do justice to the subtle tones in the sky. The smaller rocks at the edge also could have been brought in fully. Well seen

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Commentby ashish parmar on Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:05 pm

A very nice frame here. Agree to Vijay ji ..

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Commentby swapnil19 on Thu Nov 29, 2012 9:47 pm

thanks vijay sir , rajkumar sir n ashish sir for your valuable cmnts...
i just kept this one half horizoned as i wanted to portray two states of mind, one as clear as sky and other as turbulent as water sheet below.... but i agree that asthetically image looks better whn horizon is kept in onethird part, i have tht compo too...
artifacts i guess may have come as i reduced the image size too much ..raw looks ok....
i took this pic in early morning on west side..so color pic looks almost similar...

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Swapnil Deshpande
http://​swades1986.blogspot.i​n/