moments

by **nirlep** on Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:28 pm

Hi Swapnil,
moments..and what a moment you stole!! what a moment. Swapnil if you retain just the bottom two leaves and the butterfly this frame is a magic. It is so light, so intimate one may call it a zen garden. Less is more it is said, you showed it to us man. Love it all the way.
Thanks for sharing

by **swapnil19** on Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:37 pm

Thank u so much nirlep sir

by **Ganesh H Shankar** on Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:51 pm

Excellent Swapnil, how about losing the darker region at the bottom to increase the visual weight on the butterfly? Yes you will end up cropping that ant, but might strengthen the image further, just as I see it...

by **swapnil19** on Wed Jul 31, 2013 9:49 pm

thank you ganesh

totally agree about cropping the darker region , felt a strong urge to include the ant as well

will try now .

by **neelu** on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:48 am

Swapnil, the simplicity of this image is endearing,the border compliments and strengthens the vine, good idea, and agree with the other observations, about reducing the attention grabbed by the bottom of the frame..really lovely

by **dinesh.ramarao** on Thu Aug 01, 2013 11:27 am

Good one, i wish the ant was closer to the butterfly ! I just keep wishing more.

About suggestion from Ganesh, and if you have the urge to keep the darker region for the ant, you better keep it. It is important that the creator's mind matters

, no matter what we suggest.
-RD

by **swapnil19** on Thu Aug 01, 2013 12:08 pm

thank u so much neelu and dinesh sir

tried both versions , this and cropped one, just 1/4th frm bottom , second one seems to have stronger appeal though

though ant too adds up

confused

by **Prashanth Sampagar** on Thu Aug 01, 2013 6:57 pm

This is special because of its simplicity, Swapnil. i too would go with cropping the darker area. tfs.
regards,
Prashanth

by **swapnil19** on Fri Aug 02, 2013 12:56 pm

thanks prashanth i did try the crop, figuring out how to load here... till then heres the link, hope it works

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid ... to_comment

by **AratiRao** on Fri Aug 02, 2013 6:37 pm

Another nazaakat waali image!
lovely and delicate. the wisps, the ephemeral feeling of a leaf, a flutterby.

simply swell.
i saw the FB image crop .. how about a bolder crop, losing the tendril too?
tho i love the little whimsy the tendril adds

super!
A

by **swapnil19** on Sun Aug 04, 2013 12:00 pm

thanks so much arati mam

, to crop that tendril was so tough for me

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