Entropy II: The Dividing line

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Entropy II: The Dividing line
Sorry friends for this successive image. Does this work ? May be just a gimmick. Honest feedback WC
Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:48 am
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Commentby Vikas T R on Tue Feb 18, 2014 11:47 am

This is the meaning i found in net "lack of order or predictability; gradual decline into disorder." If this is the same meaning you want to portray, then its successful for my eyes :)
Diptych with colored and monochrome is working well here but i am missing something here....i have to come back again to know what i am missing here.

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Commentby Rajkumar on Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:46 pm

Thanks Vikas for taking the time.
I used Entropy as a word to mean " Measure of disorder" .
The color and monochrome were taking more or less at the same place one viewing upwards and one downwards. But, the two worlds and level of chance and diorder are completely different and was hoping to convey that .
Sure, would like to hear any more candid feedback you have on the image

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Commentby nirlep on Tue Feb 18, 2014 5:07 pm

Hi Raj,
I find the transition a bit too much for a diptych to handle. Something depicting an in between state could work better, a triptych.
Thanks for sharing

Commentby Rajkumar on Tue Feb 18, 2014 9:56 pm

Thanks Nirlep for taking time and feedback. Let me workout something

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Commentby nirlep on Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:05 am

Another option could be to crop the bottom pic into half and including the part above the bright leaf. That would make the diptych a combination of horizontal and vertical. Vertical; the story of growth, horizontal; the all embracing ground from where everything rises to return to its fold. Just my thoughts.
Thanks for sharing

Commentby Rajkumar on Thu Feb 20, 2014 5:41 am

thank you sir for the inputs. . Here is the crop. I feel Definitely better this way

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Commentby Prashanth Sampagar on Fri Feb 21, 2014 9:48 pm

Like the modified version, Raj! I felt in the original post there was a kind of disconnect between the two. But the reworked version is really wonderful. Suddenly with change in presentation has brought a different perspective to the image. TFS

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Prashanth

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Commentby Vikram Sathyanathan on Sat Feb 22, 2014 5:28 pm

Hi Raj, I like the crop version better. I second Nirlep on this, the earlier one was not conveying the message as the cropped version. I see at "before & after" or "life & death" through this image. Fine representation, thanks for sharing.