by Kaushik Balakumar on Fri May 30, 2008 11:20 pm
Nice idea. Agree with what u said about usual web + dew images.
In this image, I liked the amount of DOF & OOF in the frame. But 2 things that i'm kept wanting for:
1) With regards to its composition, I wish the string of dew drops + web was slightly more towards the bottom of the frame. In other words, cropping off a little space in the bottom + providing the same space on top.
2) There's this *vertical* line - a strong line of interest containing the in-focus *large* dew drops (near the left thirds' line of the frame). If u notice carefully, as ur eyes move from top of that line to bottom, this line weakens (i mean lacking sharpness) because focus plane is shifting away from u. Wish u were parallel to this line thereby keeping the whole vertical line of beads in complete in focus.
Just a thought...
I understand that ur shooting conditions might not have been conducive (wind etc.,). Nevertheless, a very unique image.
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Regards,
Kaushik
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