Coexistance - Other compositions

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Coexistance - Other compositions

Postby Raviprakash S S » Sat Oct 15, 2022 10:57 am

Hi,

Thanks Madhav, Vikas & Raj for providing your inputs to image image_id: 20205.

@Vikas - Whether to include the leaf on right side or not was something which I thought for a long. Finally I felt that including the leaf will give an idea about why the snake has come there, thought it adds that element to the story. Having said that, here are other versions.

@Raj - Does the 4th pic here works better to show slightly better in showing shape of the snake?

Do let me know your views.
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1. Location to give perspective of the place
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2. Another angle and compositon, I feel right side grill is competing for attention here
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3. Another composition
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4. This is another composition which I like.
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Re: Coexistance - Other compositions

Postby Nevil Zaveri » Sat Oct 15, 2022 9:59 pm

Interesting set of images n like the way how small hint of element/s changes the story.
I liked 2 without leaf, more.
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Re: Coexistance - Other compositions

Postby Ganesh H Shankar » Sun Oct 16, 2022 7:36 pm

Ravi, I too like the image 2 more. I think sharper rendition of the window rod adds a lot to the frame.
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Re: Coexistance - Other compositions

Postby Prashanth Sampagar » Tue Oct 18, 2022 8:23 pm

I agree with Nevil and Ganesh. I think the sharp rendering of the window rod brings the balance to the image.

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