Sharing...New Version

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Sharing...New Version

Postby Vikram Sathyanathan » Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:57 pm

Dear CNP members,

I posted an image titled "Sharing" this morning and have made changes to the image following Ganesh's advice. I would love to have your critiques and comments. Thanks, Vikram.
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Re: Sharing...New Version

Postby Ganesh H Shankar » Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:23 pm

Vikram, is this a small crop ? I still think it looks over sharpened to my eyes. If you want I can try processing it for you. Send me a private mail with attached/unprocessed jpg file having about 1024 pixels on the longer side. I might take a few days, please bear with me.
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Re: Sharing...New Version

Postby Ganesh H Shankar » Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:47 pm

Hey Vikram,

I tried to retain your composition (almost). Since it is a small crop we don't have enough details. This is the best I could do. My critique on the original image was based on these thoughts.

I would have loved to highlight the fine details on the trunks but then in this small crop we don't have enough of details in it. Hope this gives some idea of what I meant in my critique on the image.
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Re: Sharing...New Version

Postby Adithya Biloor » Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:58 pm

This is why you are called Sensi, Ganesh :) Loved your version very much.
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Re: Sharing...New Version

Postby Vikram Sathyanathan » Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:10 am

Hi Ganesh,

Thanks a ton for processing the image. Really liked your version, the only problem was that its a small crop.
Now I get the idea, will work upon it.

Thanks again.

best regards,

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Re: Sharing...New Version

Postby Vikram Sathyanathan » Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:13 pm

Hi everyone,

I am posting another image of "Sharing" following Ganesh's suggestions. I hope it doesn't look over-sharpened in this version. Thanks for your critiques.

regards,

Vikram
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